§ 22. Use the "deep issue" to spill the beans on the first page.
BasicIn your own words, state the principal issue decided by a court in a published opinion. Use the deep-issue technique.
Find a judicial opinion that takes several paragraphs before getting to the point. Rewrite the opening paragraph with a more satisfactory opener. If you're part of a writing group or class, bring a copy of both versions for each colleague.
Take a published case that includes a dissenting opinion. Frame the deep issue decided by the majority. Then frame the most nearly corresponding issue that a dissenter would have wanted. If you're working in a group, be prepared to discuss the basic disagreement between the two sides. Below is an example of how you might frame divergent issues on the same point:
#2 Missouri's Spill Bill imposes liability specifically on "a person having control over a hazardous substance" during a hazardous-substance emergency. In January 2000, Binary Coastal leased some land to a service station but had nothing to do with day-to-day operations or with the activities involving hazardous substances. In February, Binary Coastal's lessee experienced a release of hazardous substances. Did Binary Coastal have control of these substances at the time of release?
And here's an example from a published casei--one in which no judge dissented. Yet you might well conclude that the hypothetical dissent (#2) is the better view.
#1 Under principles of statutory construction, when statutes are in conflict, the specific controls over the general. In 1986, the Legislature narrowly tailored the retirement statutes so that a retiree over the age of 55 who decided on a lump-sum payment of benefits would forfeit certain other benefits. The Equal Employment Opportunity Commission now claims that this amendment is impermissible in light of the 1963 age-discrimination statute, which is broadly worded. Which statute controls?
i. Nebraska Equal Opportunity Comm'n v. State Employees Retirement Sys., 471 N.W.2d 399 (Neb. 1991).
© 2001, Bryan A. Garner
These exercises appear in Bryan A. Garner's Legal Writing in Plain English: A Text with Exercises, published by The University of Chicago Press and available at bookstores and on the Web at www.press.uchicago.edu.