§ 12. Learn to detest simplifiable jargon.

Exercises

Basic

Translate the following passages into plain English:

Intermediate

Translate the following passages into plain English:

Advanced

Find a published piece of legal writing that is thick with legalese. Prepare a short memo--no more than three pages--in which you (1) show at least two paragraphs from the original, (2) show how you would edit the passage, and (3) explain briefly why you made your edits. If possible, cite authority (such as a usage guide--see § 48) in support of your edits.

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In the literature on legal language and legal writing, find three quotable paragraphs (each from a different writer) discussing legalese. Assemble the quotations and citations. If you belong to a writing group or class, bring a copy of your quotations for each colleague.


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